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作者: 钱王爷 收藏:0 回复:2 点击:5216 发表时间: 2005.06.12 22:41:30

A girl who named Wu


  When I was opening the window , I saw a pretty girl out of the window . She wore a shirt with colour pink which I like best . I ran downstairs ,came to her front ,staring at her .
  Her face turned a little red , Tow big eyes winked at me . I said " I'm kingliness of this college , My name is Qian . You just look so the same as one of my friends , I made a mistake ,I'm sorry to interrupt you ." Her smiled shallowly , "It's that ? And you are kingliness of the college ? I've read you article in , I'm Wu . "
  The first time just like this . We become friends . I usually invited her to join the party , the dancing at weekend . We were very happy , and someone considered her as my girlfriend . " It doesn't matter ." She said , when I told her whatmisconstrue had happened . We fall in love with each other bit by bit , one dayI called her , I said ,"Do my girlfriend ,I'll try my best to give you my affection ." She smiled , said "If you like , I'd like to ."
  The day when she was being my girlfriend , We had the most interesting time .Oneday ,I cuddled her , asked "If we can't be consort , what will you do ?" "Just forget you ." She fleetness answered , I cried . Then she said "Because if I still love you so much , the life of my will be tragedy , and the best way of solving this problem ." I kissed her .
  She is a femininity girl , just as the water . She will cry for the flowers ,the moon ,and everything she care of . Once I left my college to the school which my brother be in , she looked me for a long time , but can't find .She cried ,shecried for mine returning . Afternoon I came back ,she went at my cherish .The tear fell onto my hand . I dauted her long hair ,kissed her face ,"My girl , Wherever I leave for , my heart is at your adjacency .You're just my worry ." She smiled through tears .
  The day in school goes too fast , unconsciously we were faced with graduate . A summer weekend , I arranged her . She came with a whiteness shirt , like a princess . I was shaken by her beautiwul and holiness , I drew back her hand ,looked at her eyes , said ."We must separate . But I love you ! I can't live without you !" Her tears appeared .
  Give me a chance , I will love you once again .
  


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回复人: 狂晕的蚂蚁 Re:A 回复时间: 2005.06.14 02:49

    my ...god.....
  看英文像高中学生,翻印成中文。像初中生。
  建议还是用中文吧。。。蚂蚁晕的利害
  

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回复人: 槛外人 Re:A 回复时间: 2005.08.01 12:12

    狂晕的蚂蚁;选择另外一种语言,是作者的权利,无论写得怎样,我们都该鼓励。我想,如果让你来写,你未必有人家的勇气和水平。
  钱王爷,好样儿的,希望能看到你更大的提高。

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